The Machine That Goes Ping

The very first published story in the Toffia universe, this was inspired by a combination of photos of Cambridge in the snow and the 5 hour a day commute I suffered for most of 2005. The title is, obviously, a Python Ref.

It was published to Alt.Fan.Pratchett between the 22nd August and 9th September 2005. I am quite astoundly pleased I actually managed to finish it. It needs a bit of editing, and probably about three more episodes in the middle…

The thread it was originally posted to is here on Google Groups. One day I hope to get around to editing it properly.

  1. Every time I make a a post at the moment, my laptop goes Ping…
  2. We eventually found a way to protect against the rain…
  3. The rain’s stopped…
  4. Problem
  5. The most difficult thing about being a fictional character…
  6. There was a crack in reality…
  7. So, I have been made the leader of the DXO Special Operations Cambridge Office…
  8. We drifted though a dark Cambridge street…
  9. Our trinity met outside a Cambridge college
  10. Every time

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